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This is a collection of sentences before and after I checked them and made them hypnotic. First I give you the sentence or headline which you commonly find in most of the sales copy and then I give you a revised hypnotic version. You can easily use them to make your copy hypnotic.

 

 

(b) The results were great

 

(a) My eyes popped looking at the results

 

 

(b)Our online advertising helps your product get the right exposure.

 

(a) With over 500 hits per day our online advertising guarantees to showcase your product to the right prospects, most likely to become your customers

 

 

(b) Excited, I opened the door

 

(a) I kicked open the door unable to hold my excitment

 

Now the big one which I used in my sites main sales pitch. Imagine now you are a MBA graduate desperately looking for a job and you came across this ad.

 

(b)

“Infotrainingx Solutions now offers advanced training program on SAP”

This training program which is exclusively designed for MBA graduates gives an in-depth understanding in modules like HR, CRM, FI and BI. As SAP is widely adopted by large companies most management jobs are currently demanding SAP skills and this has become a must do course for all MBA graduates

We are the pioneers in SAP training with a placement record of 80% for all our batches. No reason why infotrainingx solutions is the no. 1 choice of all management students.

Join our program to get your dream job.
Admission details

Program starts on 26th January at 7pm.
Program Fee: Rs.10,000/-
Hurry! First 15 admissions get a 10% fee discount


Contact 9990089789 for more details and course contents




Imagine now you are the same MBA desperately looking for a job and you came across this ad.


(a)
”This One skill is keeping most MBA's from getting those big jobs in MNCs”

A recent global survey by Software Federation showed:


  • Close to 70% of all major multinationals are heavily using this to integrate and accelerate their businesses.

  • They are spending heavily in getting their management staff trained on this and...

  • Most of these companies have made this a mandatory skill when hiring fresh management graduates to cut down on the training cost


All these giants are talking about...... SAP, an enterprise business solutions suite which guarantees to increase the efficiency and effectiveness of managers by over 70% (survey report). No wonder why this has become the “One key skill” for any business graduate to secure a dream job.

“This has become an absolute necessity for all managers”

    • Sai Ram(Manager Operations, OEm)


“No management hiring without this skill”

    • Sanjay Subash(Manager HR, Ess ltd)


So here's the straight question... Are you still chasing those big jobs without this skill ?

Then its high time you master it. So wait no longer to register for our 6 week intense, industry ready SAP training program which will leave no leaf unturned in delivering the best to you.
4 amazing benefits you are about to receive


  • Exactly after 6 weeks of training you will end up working for your dream company. With over 80% placement results in the last 3 years we lead the race of delivering the best resources to the Industry. Check for our placement record at www.infotrainingx.com


“Infotrainingx Solutions made my dream of working in a MNC a reality. Today I'm working for IBBm thanks to their effort”

      • - Sriram Ramesha (a participant)

  • Our unique training methods and techniques will blow your mind. It guarantees to transform delivered knowledge into immediately usable skills, this is the key to training & placement excellence as our records show that this is the single most reason for our unmatched placement record

  • Secretes revealed to you, which only the experienced managers knew and kept it for themselves to achieve business excellence. This revelation will close in all those skill gaps that will make you a management genius you always dreamed to become.


“This is totally unique and unbelievable skills, they made me feel rich with experience”

        • Hridayanadh (a participant)

  • Above all you get a money back guarantee for our course. Read more details about it below



How to get registered and what is the program fee ?

You can get this career transforming skills for the smallest investment you can ever make... just for Rs.10,000/-. But HURRY! for our Special Discount...first 15 participants to get registered will get a 10% flat discount on the program fee. Register now, as this offer will be taken in a snap.


Money Back Guarantee

After attending the first week of our program, if you feel our training quality is far below than what we promised, you can request for discontinuation and every single rupee that you have paid will be refunded back to you, no questions asked. How's this for a metal proof guarantee and the belief that we have in our training process.

Next batch starts on 26th January. So hurry and register now, remember the first 15 participants get a 10% off on the fee.

For registrations and complete technical details call us now at 9990089789 or visit www.infotrainingx.com


That's it

 

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